What do you think?

I have added a masthead, made the editors note text smaller and added a picture of the editor and a signature, changed the position of "best Equipment List" any more changes?

I have added an editors note, following some opinions on my first draft, which one do you prefer?

What do you think of my contents page?

Edits

These are some pictures that i have edited for my contents page.

What do you think of this version of my double page spread?

Contents page without pictures

This is the layout for my contents page, obviously there arent any pictures at the moment, i was just wondering if you thought i should do anything else to the layout?

This is an option for a double page spread, just wanted to know if you thought there were any changes I needed to make?